Wolf Bait!

[cyberghostface.insanejournal.com]

 

This one comes from Haunt of Fear #13.

Comments

[fungo_squiggly.insanejournal.com]

God, those wolves seem more like cartoon piranhas. As starving as they apparently are you'd think they couldn't run so fast.

Still, I really liked this story. It did a good job of building up the tension. Of course if they'd opened that big package of meat and just tossed part of it to the wolves at a time, instead of dumping it all at once, they probably wouldn't have had to murder one of their fellow passengers.

[volksjager.insanejournal.com]

Great story it would make an excellent short film.

[psychop_rex.insanejournal.com]

That was pretty damn good, actually. As a suspense story, it was very well done - I can picture it as an old movie from the fifties. I kinda doubt that wolves ever actually acted like that, but then neither did gorillas, and that doesn't stop me enjoying old 'killer gorilla' stories.

[arilou_skiff.insanejournal.com]

Dude, the people actually OUTNUMBER the wolves. I doubt a wolfpack would attack as long as people kept together.

[cyberghostface.insanejournal.com]

Those wolves don't look too concerned about that.

[dr_hermes.insanejournal.com]

Wolves hunts herds of deer that outnumber them. It's usual predator behavior.

[lakrids404.insanejournal.com]

Great ending

[janegray.insanejournal.com]

I'm just glad it wasn't the chick with the baby, since they say "the sacrificed one", not ones.

[blakeyrat.insanejournal.com]

It could have been just the baby. They need the woman for other things. Oh yeah, I went there.