Scans_Daily

That's fine, but I think it went way too far in that direction. I did not get the impression that these events were linked. For all I knew, Cap was teleported away, or everyone else was teleported away, and then corpses, and then things and etc.

The problem with a real nightmare is that it frequently makes no damn sense when you wake up. I guess it captures that element, but you lose the idea of what even happened in the nightmare at all. I had to look at it three times to get anything out of it and then ask what happened anyway.

It erred on the side of "art" instead of the side of "readability." I think it's a bit of a mistake in a sequential medium. There at least needs to be a central focal point that you can follow in sequence. The rest can go to hell, but if you can at least follow what the dreamer is doing and thinking, that is sufficient. And I couldn't. So it didn't have any sense of emotion for me, really. It sortof sunk into random images.

I mean, it's a personal taste thing, but I don't seem to be the only one who had no idea what even was going on there. Context may have helped for the ending panels in the dream, but it doesn't make it flow any better.