2011-11-26 04:22 pm (UTC)
Relying on dialogue to carry a scene means the art isn't good enough to do its job. It's largely an action scene, the art
have primacy here.
I could see if it were a heart-to-heart talk or something similarly intimate, but that's not what this is.
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