Deadpool #15: Wade goes to San Francisco...

[drsevarius.insanejournal.com]

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[box_in_the_box.insanejournal.com]

Once again, somebody needs to tell Way that he's nowhere near as funny as he thinks he is.

His entire tenure on Deadpool has been an exercise in TRYING TOO HARD with material that doesn't really live up to his attempts to sell it, to the point that it feels like the comic book equivalent of sitting through a Dane Cook stand-up routine ("If I SHOUT THE WORDS, they'll suddenly SOUND FUNNIER!!!").

[taggerung301.insanejournal.com]

i thought that this part was pretty good actually
to each their own i suppose

[box_in_the_box.insanejournal.com]

The fact that he's conversing with BOTH sets of narration boxes now is even WORSE than it was before, and the dialogue in general had enough of a tin ear to equal the Fail of Bob Gale and Marc Guggenheim, so much so that it took what actually should have been a very funny premise and pretty much killed it stone dead. These pages would be immeasurably improved by being stripped of all their words, since the visuals are pretty damn funny on their own.

[wingsonwater.insanejournal.com]

Once again, somebody needs to tell WayDeadpool that he's nowhere near as funny as he thinks he is.

I can't really say 'fixed' here. Either option applies.