Date: 2024-10-11 04:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] esmegrey
I'm liking the series overall, but Kitty narrating out loud to no one in particular is REALLY clunky. Expository dialogue is a common trope, but this...is not working. I could run with it if she was just kinda muttering about her life, but the moment she has to tell herself the name of the woman she's dating, it is like nails on a chalkboard. Takes me right out of the book.
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