His introduction was deliberately paced.
Nov. 20th, 2015 11:32 pmIt came in its turn in the setup of the Black Panther's post-Shadowland status quo.
It began with him describing where he lived and continued with his family.
Then it got into what he did to make his money, and how he now had the opportunity to move up the ladder.
The ladder was New York's criminal hierarchy.

(It's safe to say he probably doesn't care much for the Tracksuit Draculas.)

(How much his syntax's part of his branding's never specified.)

(The limitation of his power and his use of it working around that's a nice touch.
Oh yes, pagecount- 2 and 3/5ths out of 22.)
It began with him describing where he lived and continued with his family.
Then it got into what he did to make his money, and how he now had the opportunity to move up the ladder.
The ladder was New York's criminal hierarchy.

(It's safe to say he probably doesn't care much for the Tracksuit Draculas.)

(How much his syntax's part of his branding's never specified.)

(The limitation of his power and his use of it working around that's a nice touch.
Oh yes, pagecount- 2 and 3/5ths out of 22.)
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Date: 2015-11-21 08:23 am (UTC)On a completely different not, this *is* an interesting superpower, but it coming from a super-soldier serum knockoff doesn't really work for me. It's too out-there as an ability for that. It feels... completely arbitrary in a counter-intuitive way, if that makes sense? Like a radioactive spider bite giving someone magnetism.
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Date: 2015-11-21 09:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-11-22 03:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-11-22 11:28 pm (UTC)And really, aren't unexpected results the heart of "SCIENCE!"?
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Date: 2015-11-23 08:33 am (UTC)And I'm probably making it sound like a bigger deal than it is for me, the way I'm writing so much about it. It was just a moment of "Eh, kinda forced" when I read it.