I knowww, I feel like I'm reading a storyboard or something. I think a major pitfall writer-artist team comics often fall into is TOO MANY FUCKING WORD BUBBLES.
Cut out some dialogue, Bendis. I promise you, ever jewel-like phrase you have polished to perfection is actually not necessary for the scene. It sounds crazy, I know, but MAYBE you should consider editing?
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Date: 2011-02-04 12:08 am (UTC)Cut out some dialogue, Bendis. I promise you, ever jewel-like phrase you have polished to perfection is actually not necessary for the scene. It sounds crazy, I know, but MAYBE you should consider editing?