The art is great. If I hadn't read your blurb first, I'd have just assumed that these panels came from a published comic.
The one (hopefully constructive) piece of criticism I have is that it's lacking a certain amount of dynamism in the action sequences. In the panels where Kate's holding the bow, it looks like she's posing with it rather than getting ready to fire it. There should be more visible tension in her body.
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Date: 2013-07-30 10:49 pm (UTC)The one (hopefully constructive) piece of criticism I have is that it's lacking a certain amount of dynamism in the action sequences. In the panels where Kate's holding the bow, it looks like she's posing with it rather than getting ready to fire it. There should be more visible tension in her body.
Apart from that, though, great job.