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"Earlier in my reviews of this run, I commented that Spencer’s version of Sam Wilson reminded me a lot of President Barack Obama. Now that we’ve had more time with him, I see that he’s much more than that. He’s every black person that’s ever had to think about where they fall in the battle of injustice. He’s every one that’s been given power and had it stripped away. Which, eventually, boils down to practically every minority in America. [...] This current run of Captain America: Sam Wilson is going to end up on the syllabus of a really liberal, young-minded sociology professor one day." -- Black Nerd Problems

















Date: 2017-05-11 12:37 pm (UTC)
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I mean, you have Rayshaun's history and actions up to this point, you know:

He watches the whole controversy of Rage being convicted of robbing a pawnshop, despite Captain America's best efforts to defend him. This enrages Rayshaun so much that he puts on Rage facepaint and joins the riots, firebombs buildings. Captain America calls for peace, obviously Rayshaun does not listen. Then later, he watches Captain America resign because Sam's given up on his methods and doesn't believe in wearing the flag anymore.

And then I ask you if you think Rayshaun's going to give up rioting and be a good clean patriotic superhero, or if he's going to continue on his path, and you just don't know. As if both options are equally likely to you.

Why do you do this, why do you reduce all things to their most generic formulation? The diametrically opposed methods of Reyshaun and Sam don't matter, what's really fundamental is that they're both fighting against the same thing, so maybe they agree - or then again, maybe they don't. At this point, why even bother reading a story then, when anything can happen next and make sense, where there's no momentum of the story leading in one direction or another? A tyrant can pardon the rebels or execute them immediately, and they're both equally sensible options. A villain can want to prevent a force field from being built, or depend on the force field being built, and they're both part of his master plan. A teen rebel can either reform, or keep going down his path, and based on the story so far I have no idea what's going to happen next! Why even bother with plot and buildup? Just flip a coin!

Date: 2017-05-11 02:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sadoeuphemist
A kid firebombs a bank and you say "he's a blank slate," okay. We're not seeing random glimpses into this guy's life. We're seeing the moments Nick Spencer chooses to show us to characterize him. If your response to a character doing something is "maybe he immediately regretted it off-screen", then you have given up on the craft of storytelling. If you sincerely view characterization is as arbitrary as rigging 'who would win in a fight' - it depends on what's convenient to the plot - then characterization doesn't matter.

"The right context," you say, "execution is everything" you say, and yet here you are ignoring what actually happened in favor of all the possibilities that might have occurred. We could have seen nothing but scenes of Rayshaun going to school and doing his homework, we could have been shown scenes of him killing a dog, we could have been shown scenes of him defending a protester from the cops, and you would still be here using the same argument, that he is unknown and unknowable, separate from everything that has actually happened.

Sure, yes, Rayshaun could be anything, these are comic books after all, but you're allowed to say, "I think there was a change of plans, I think there was a soft retcon here, because this certainly doesn't seem like this was what they were building up to when they introduced him."

Date: 2017-05-11 11:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sadoeuphemist
Even as a background character, an extra, Rayshaun's purpose is to help set the tone of the scene, right? In his case specifically, it's to show that Sam is losing control of the situation. Elvin's been convicted, and despite Sam's constant pleas for non-violence, the community is outraged and breaking out into rioting. Rayshaun's purpose is to illustrate that.

Sam continues to call for non-violence, but the riots continue and his words start sounding increasingly hollow even to him, until he finally resigns as Captain America. This is the story we are being told, of Sam's methods failing until he gives up on them.

And then you come in and say, hey, maybe this rioter listened to Sam off-screen. Maybe he regretted his actions, off-screen. Maybe Sam's methods were actually effective, off-screen. Maybe he convinced someone, off-screen. Maybe he succeeded, off-screen!

Never mind that Reyshaun is listening to Sam's resignation as he sneaks back into his house. Maybe he immediately regretted his actions, maybe he listened to Sam's earlier speech, and immediately stopped rioting way back then. Maybe he's just been hanging around all this time outside his house dressed up as Rage for no reason whatsoever. Sure, that's technically possible. Or maybe you're ignoring the actual text of the story in favor of shrugging and saying, maybe, maybe, maybe.

Even for background characters, heck, even for props, you don't just assume an untold backstory that says the opposite. If we're telling a story about a poverty-stricken town and a broken down jalopy drives by, what's the point in saying, hey, maybe the driver's an eccentric millionaire and he keeps that car around for sentimental reasons!

Seriously, why do you even read stories if you don't care about what happens in them. Why not just stare at a blank piece of paper and say 'Wow! Anything could happen!'
Edited Date: 2017-05-11 11:43 pm (UTC)

Date: 2017-05-12 02:32 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sadoeuphemist
I mean in the context of this run and this story arc in particular, Sam has argued the benefits of nonviolent resolution. Rage is a foil to Sam, right? Rage would rather run in and punch the bad guys, that's the tension between them. The whole reason Rage allowed himself to be put on trial was because he agreed to try Sam's 'better way', and call attention to this injustice without punching people. And the arc culminates in Rage getting hospitalized and Sam failing to keep the peace and the community breaking out into a riot.

I'm not talking about a strictly causal relationship from a single speech, I'm talking a thematic one, in which Sam spends his entire run trying to keep a balance, trying to find a better way, and Rayshaun and the riots are the evidence of that better way not working. Rioting doesn't need to be harshly portrayed - obviously there's a lot of sympathy with the rioters - it just needs to show Sam's failure to provide a better option.

(My other examples were 'staying home and doing his homework' and 'saving a protester from a cop'; they weren't meant to vilify rioting, they were random hypotheticals.)

You are still saying: maybe this rioter gave up rioting off-screen and was just peacefully protesting like Sam wanted, in a story about Sam's failure. If you want to argue that the story's not about Sam's failure, or that Reyshaun rioting doesn't reflect badly on Sam at all, or some other argument like that, sure, do that. But don't just shrug and throw up your arms and say, maybe, maybe, maybe.

Date: 2017-05-12 11:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sadoeuphemist
Because someone killing a dog, that is determinative. A writer's not going to put that in unless the point is, "This guy's a monster."

Hmm, not really though. Maybe a racist sicced their dog on him and he had to defend himself by killing it. Maybe he was caught up in the emotion of the moment and immediately regretted it. Maybe it was an entirely reasonable decision in the heat of the moment. It's a powderkeg, and people will act differently outside of that powderkeg. So who knows?

I'm joking, but I think it's weird that you can rightfully see a guy killing a dog as the writer painting them as a monster, but show a guy firebombing a bank, and you're making all these excuses that maybe the writer intended to portray someone totally different, and that maybe the character regretted it off-screen.

I think the difference is that you view rioting as vilifying, and so you think it would be wrong to judge these people at their lowest point. I don't think that. I think it's a legitimate character trait, a legitimate ideology, that it's a legitimate option at this point to resort to violence after the legal system has clearly proven it doesn't care about them and theirs. I think it would be interesting to see an anarchist superhero - okay, maybe he doesn't firebomb banks specifically, that's sort of cliche - but it would be interesting for me to see a superhero who's opposed to the establishment, opposed to the cops, and not afraid of using violence to attain his goals.

I think the opposite would be insulting - if Rayshaun were to become just another goody-goody patriotic hero who upholds the law, that would be fucking bullshit. Why would he be doing that, when the law has already proven it doesn't care about people like him?

You say the rioting is an understandable consequence of rightful outrage, but you're treating it like a moral lapse.
Edited Date: 2017-05-12 11:56 pm (UTC)

Date: 2017-05-13 11:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sadoeuphemist
Rayshaun is not an average guy who was at a protest that turned violent, and he got swept up in it. He was sitting safely at home when he heard the news, so he made a firebomb (!!) and put on a disguise, and he snuck down to an apparently peaceful protest and struck the first blow unprovoked. (This was actually really inconsiderate to all the peaceful protesters.)

If a real-life rioter did that, I be comfortable assuming that yeah, he did have a commitment to change through violent action.

I just don't understand your criteria. Why is killing a dog 'determinative', why is refusing to fight back 'determinative and telling'? I might as well say that a fight is an exceptional circumstance, and how a person reacts when they're being attacked in a fight doesn't say anything about them as people. Maybe they freaked out, maybe they froze up, maybe, maybe, maybe. And we're talking about superhero comics here, most of the circumstances are exceptional. The writer chooses which moments to show us, and if he wanted to make a point that Rayshaun regretted his actions, he could have easily shown us that. He didn't. At some point we have to take it on faith that what the writer shows us is what he wants us to see, that despite the exceptional circumstances, the writer isn't deliberately just showing us all the reactions that are out of character.

Date: 2017-05-14 07:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sadoeuphemist
If all I knew about a guy is that he put on a mask / facepaint and snuck down to a peaceful protest and firebombed a bank from the shadows and initiated a riot, absolutely, I would ascribe political motivation and commitment to his cause, and I would expect him to repeat it in the future.

This "because he's opposed to violence" bit - how can you prove motivation? Maybe he's lying, maybe he's dissembling, maybe he's justifying his cowardice to himself - intent is fundamentally unknowable to outsiders, and sometimes it's mysterious even to the actors themselves. You are slipping back into 'everything is unknown and unknowable territory'. Barring any evidence to the contrary, you have to judge people by their actions, and this is especially true for fictional characters, who do not exist at all outside of the page, outside of the thoughts and actions and words we are shown, so we can actually see them in their entirety.

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